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The soundwaves light up.
Yet another buckle-kneed espionage somersault.
(Their ears aren't suspenseful,
but they foresee the unseen scene, of course.)

Approach with caution, I require pharmaceuticals.

Neurological therapeutics, a compensated endorsor
of the teary-eyed kin of self-slain brethrin.
(And I'll believe it.)

My entourage dons camouflage. I don't come around much.
(I'll file my complaints at the capitol building.)
Breathe in, cleanse. Breathe out, repeat. Pretty please?

Bomb another terrorist, you terrorist.
This violent man has met his end,
he will never murder again.

Flood the senses with twenty dollar thrills.
(We can't quite make-out the movements.)
For it is the season to be polygraphed. A recluse, blanketed in shame.

Reciprocate words so futile to modern day scriptures.

She'll end it, sooner than I'd like.
Try three --
in the morning.

Let me drive her home just once more. Pretty please?

Such apotheosis,
her breath on a sullen heart. That heart, rubbed gently
against her white tanktop. Shine me up.
(My name? Not apple, thought I'll assume it your wish.)
No cached braces.

Summer, be my fever. (Pretty please?)
XOXO
:iconlike-roses-2-wraiths:

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catching summer deities (pretty please)

this is how my summer's going. and my past summers. i suppose that's what i've written about here. =S

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:iconsubduedpromises:
Flood the senses with twenty dollar thrills. We can't
quite make out the movements. For it is the season
to be polygraphed. A recluse, blanketed in shame.

Reciprocate words so futile to modern day scriptures.
She'll end it, sooner than I'd like. Try three in the
morning. Let me drive her home just once more. Pretty please?
:heart: Lovely

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:halfliquid: from a girl inside a ghost town
:iconledbypassion:
i love how you always make me think.

and i love this part:

"Yet another buckle-kneed espionage somersault"

you are so very talented with words my friend:)
:iconsmoking-mirrors:
I love it

--
<salshep> but then I have a thing for wood
:iconsaintlydark:
This is a beautiful piece, haunting.. really. It has a very erratic feel and I enjoy that very much.

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“One piece of his heart for every tear she granted..”
:iconguardianomega:
Hmm...a very visualizable peice. I, personally, was able to see some shift in picture and in thought, making for very sharp transitions, but a very smooth mural. The language...is HUGE...and fun to read, the stanzas also help to create the erratic and sudden-burst nature of the peice that had the suspenseful glow that I liked. A very interesting and enjoyable peice.

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~Omega (Defiance)

I can't not be by Her side. I have woven my very heart to hers...and now I feel nothing but her waiting, nothing but her sorrow...and I wish so much to only feel her smile...

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